rmoff's random ramblings
about talks

My first presentation - afterthoughts

Published May 23, 2010 by in Biforum, Presentation at https://preview.rmoff.net/2010/05/23/my-first-presentation-afterthoughts/

I delivered my first presentation today, at the RittmanMead BI Forum.I was really nervous in the hours and minutes leading up to it, but once I got up there and started talking I actually quite enjoyed it. If you were in the audience, I’d love some feedback in the comments section below, particularly any “constructive criticism”. I obviously didn’t make too much of a mess of it, as I was awarded “best speaker” of the event, which was a great honour. Hopefully I’ll get the opportunity to present again soon, perhaps at an UKOUG event.

You can download the presentation here.

Whilst I was writing the presentation I went through a lot of versions (iterative, huh), as having never delivered a presentation before it took me a while to figure out how to go about writing it. Here are my thoughts that I jotted down during the process, and which hopefully may help someone else:

  • You’re writing a presentation, not a paper. You don’t have to cite every reference or prove every example.
  • You’re writing a presentation, not a classroom training session. You don’t have to necessarily detail every step to do what you’re doing.
  • What do you want your audience to leave with?
  • What are you adding by being there that they couldn’t get from a well written blog post or white paper?

This post was useful: Creating technical presentations

I’d strongly recommend talking through your slides, ideally with a colleague but even to your dog – you’ll find some transitions really grate, and some slides you’ve talked about before even getting to them and skip over - that’s a sign you should drop them.

Someone mentioned “The Curve” to me, and if you think of good presentations you’ve been to you’ll know what it means - that idea of a start, the chunky bit, and the gentle ending - all of it carrying you with you on well, a curve. It’s a good concept to aim for.

Finally - possibly trite, but something I found to be true: The presentation will write itself. How’s that work? Well do a version, and then leave it for a week, completely alone. When you come back to it you’ll be fresher and some bits will be obviously superfluous or missing detail.

Here’s a link to a previous posting with some good advice on writing a presentation. One which I found particularly helpful was to remember Pete Scott’s advice – the audience will be on your side (hopefully!). It’s not a sales pitch to a sceptical audience, it’s sharing your knowledge with others who will find it interesting.


Robin Moffatt

Robin Moffatt works on the DevRel team at Confluent. He likes writing about himself in the third person, eating good breakfasts, and drinking good beer.

Story logo

© 2025